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'Leafy?'

Day 5 - watercolor and pen
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AnalyticalYoung Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
Spinning leaves float on
Currents push, pull, wax, and wane
They cling together

Hold on to each other even when the currents are swift.
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breesense Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Whoa, that's very good! I like the first line the best, I can totally picture leaves falling and floating.
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AnalyticalYoung Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
This just gave me an idea for the poem I just said I'd work on.
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breesense Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Seriously? Cool, write it out!
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